Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 6. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 22, 2017

Week 6 Story: Kaloo




Kaloo

"Kaloo" Source: Pixabay


The air is hot and heavy, saturated with moisture it is impossible to be dry. The deep blue water gradually turned green as the island approached. With the green water came the increasing swampy smell of the Pergonia Islands. In school  Kaloo had read in school that it rains twenty out of the twenty-four hours. The thought of a constant barrage of water made him sick as his disgust deepened. Anger and betrayal filled his heart. His own father had banished him to live life on such a vile island and despite his mistakes he felt this to be unforgivable . He could already feel the moisture seeping into his skin and dampening his flame. "I refuse to live here, I must escape this dreadful place", he thought to himself. "Fifty miles east are the red plains, take me there and I will not harm you", Kaloo shouted to the guards. "Shut it!", said the guard followed by a smack of his whip to the back of the neck. Kaloo could feel the heat begin to grow, starting in his stomach and extending to his shackled hands and feet. The iron chains began to glow as his anger grew. "One last warning, turn this boat around!" said Kaloo. "Thats enough!", said the second guard as he kicked Kaloo in the side. Kaloo gasped for air, his eyes turned red as his chains grew hotter. He felt uneasy, the same uncontrollable feeling that accompanied burning down the local market as a young boy. He rose and threw off the molten chains. The guard with the whip ordered him to stand down, but Kaloo only saw the movement of his mouth. The ringing in his ears was far to loud, as the heat began to reach his face. The guard mouthed a series of commands as his whipping arm swung back, the brass tip hurled towards Kaloo's face leaving a deep cut. Kaloo felt as though someone was controlling him. His right arm raised, in line with the belly of the guard. His arm felt as though it was going to explode, until a bolt of fire sent the guard flying off the boat and into the sea. What seemed to have taken place in a few minutes happened in an instant. The second guard swung his axe at Kaloo, slicing down his shoulder. He felt the heat in his toes and swung around kicking the guard in the temple. The kick exploded with fiery crack, scorching the guards face and knocking him unconscious. The ringing in his ears began to retreat along with the heat in his limbs. He felt a sharp pain and fell to the floor clinching his shoulder. Blood flew fast from the wound and he began to feel light headed. Kaloo fetched the medical kit below the captains wheel, fumbling around until he found thread but no needle. His right arm had lost feeling and needed to close the wound quick. He focused, searching for the heat he felt earlier in his stomach. It grew as he guided it towards his left finger. Reaching over his right shoulder he expelled a small flame, cauterizing the wound. Although the pain was immense, it was overcome by the feeling of joy. This had been the first time he was able to control his fiery power. He shackled the guard and steered the ship due east. He headed away from the island towards the vast red plains and even more importantly towards his father.




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Authors Note
This story is loosely based off the stories of Ramayana. This story focuses on two cities and an avatar named Rama. Rama is fierce with a bow and kills many dark creatures. He ends up marrying the kings daughter after completing the challenge of breaking the sacred bow. Rama is soon exiled by his father for fourteen years. Fortunately for Rama, his wife Sita and brother accompany him. I used some characters from this story and ideas of dark and light to fuel the overlying theme.

Tuesday, February 21, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Section D




Reading Notes D


"Arjuna kills Karna" Source: Wiki Commons

  • After Bhishma dies, Drona takes of the army
  • Arjuna promises to defend his brother no matter what
  • Abhimanyu, Arjuna's son, dies in battle
  • Krishna will help Arjuna get revenge
  • Would like to use this in my story
  • Bhima's son, Ghatokacha dies in battle
  • The Pandavas kill their old Guru, Drona
  • Karen takes control of the army after the death of Drona
  • Bhima gets his revenge from the betting scandal
  • Arjuna shoots Karna in the head with an arrow
  • Duryodhana hides under the lake using his special powers
  • Ashwattaman plans on killing Pandavas while they sleep
  • He fails and is to be punished by the gods
  • They take his special powerful jewel
  • Bhishma gives advice on how to live on after the battle before he finally dies
  • Yudhishthira claims his throne by sacrificing another horse
  • He kills the horse after it roams and becomes the king
  • A golden mongoose tells a story of a brahmin
  • Vyasa summons the ghosts of dead warriors
  • This would be a cool power to implement into the story
  • Krishna is killed by an accidental arrow to the foot
  • This is a weak way for him to go, not a fan
  • Arjuna's grandson is gifted with the kingdom after the Pandavas and Drauapadi deiced to not rule
  • Yudhishthira journeys to hell as one of his tests

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Monday, February 20, 2017

Reading Notes: Mahabharata Section C



Reading Notes C



"Karna" Source: Wiki Commons
  • The Pandavas are exiled to the forrest, here they encounter many sages
  • This exile is very similar to Rama's
  • Krishna visits the Pandavas during exile
  • Arjuna goes on an adventure to find special weapons for the Pandavas
  • Shiva gives Arjuna the divine bow
  • For reaching the city of Hiryanyapura, Indra gives his son a special power of shout
  • Hanuman is still around!
  • Want to include I'm again in my next story
  • Threats are made between Karna and Arjuna
  • Indra steals Karna's invincible armor 
  • Karna has a special secret arrow
  • Yudhishthira answers all the riddles and is granted two boons 
  • For the last year of exile, the Pandavas and Draupidi must be in hiding
  • Draupadi is almost raped by Prince Kichaka but saved by Bhima
  • Duryodhana steal king Virates cattle but the Pandavas help him
  • War is upon the two groups of brothers
  • Krishna attempts to make peace between them
  • Krishna and Arjuna end their beef
  • Krishna turns into his godly form, Vishnu in order to make peace
  • Karna still does not know he is related to the Pandavas
  • Krishna tells Karna of his relationship to the brothers
  • Duryodhana and Kauravas vs Yudhishthira and Pandavas
  • Battle is imminent
  • Arjuna does not want to fight once he sees the other arm and the people he knows
  • Krishna persuades him to fight
  • Bhishma is the general of the Kauravas but doesn't have as much loyalty towards the Duryodhana
  • Bhishma is killed by Amba


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