Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 4. Show all posts

Sunday, February 12, 2017

Feedback Focus



Focusing Techniques Ranked:

1. Copy and Delete
2. Reading Out Loud
3. Use a Timer


Advantages:

Copy and Delete- Quick form of notes, makes reading go by faster
Reading Out Loud- Catch more details, and understand more of the story
Use a Timer- Only focusing on reading

Disadvantages:

Copy and Delete- If you don't make a note, you can forget which comment goes with what part
Reading Out Loud- Takes a long time
Use a Timer- Only reading, if you have a comment you may forget it when you are done

I was surprised by the copy and delete method, at first I thought it would be pointless and writing down notes would be better. After giving it a shot I enjoyed it, especially if I did not enjoy what I was reading. It seemed like it gave me a sense of finishing the story in steps instead of a drawn out read.
I will try the copy and delete method in the future. I have used the reading out loud method when I was younger because I would skip over a lot of information reading the stories in my head. I enjoy having a physical copy of the book and making annotations in the margin. I liked the Cat and Dog story, reminded me of a favorite childhood movie and really validated how I feel about cats.



"Cat vs Dog" Source: Flickr

Wednesday, February 8, 2017

Week 4 Story: Rama




Fifteen days have passed on an imperial boat. The young Rama is shackled and heavily guarded in route to his new "home". The gaseous air floating above the blue waters of the Golpitha islands burned Rama's lungs. Rama did not resist, he accepted his temporary sentence with honor. Despite the poisonous air, the island was beautiful in its own regard. The black volcanic soil and clear waters provided a plentiful habitat for the tropical creatures. The shackles were unchained and Rama swam to shore, leaving the only faces he would see for the next five years behind. Upon reaching the black sandy shore, Rama had an odd feeling about the volcanic island. "Something is off, something is too perfect about this so called prison", Rama thought to himself. Rama decided not to explore do the receding sunlight and made camp on the shore. Exhausted from the long journey, Rama quickly fell asleep.
 "What are you doing here!", boomed a deep voice. Rama was surrounded in a dark fog, unable to speak out to the monstrous voice. "I sense something in you I have not felt in a long long time", said the dark fog surrounding Rama. Rama tried to run but his legs were thigh deep in the cold black sand. The fog closed in, seeping into his nose and lungs. The voice grew louder and louder, ringing Rama's ears. "Boom!" Rama woke in an instant, clothes drenched in sweat desperately trying to gather himself. "Boom!" What Rama thought was the voice from his slumber was coming from the heart of the island. The ground began to shake, and the lightening revealed what was hidden in the night sky. The volcano was pouring smoke from its highest point. "BOOM!" Rama looked up to see a blinding explosion. The volcano blew molten lava from its mouth, spewing hot rock and ash over the island. The trees surrounding the volcano began to smoke; the smoke soon turned to flames as the lava cascaded over them. With the lava fast approaching, Rama began to run towards the second highest hill on the island. The heat scorching his heels and back reminded him of his evil cousin, Kaloo. The hill Rama had seen from a distance was no hill, but a rocky jagged cliff. Rama tried manipulating the air to lift him higher into the face of the cliff but the heavy gaseous air was something he had never experienced. The lava was approaching fast, only a few yards away. He began to climb the loose jagged rock. The lava splashed against the cliff a couple yards below him. He leaped upwards to a notch in the cliff but his weight broke the loose rock. Holding on with one arm, his grip began to slip. Rama's sweaty palm finally slipped from the rock and he tumbled down towards the molten rock. In his head he heard the booming voice from his nightmare, "HAHAHA" yelled the deep voice. Rama was not ready to die but began accepting his fate. Out of the corner of his eye, a swooping figure snagged Rama's arm lifting him away from the lava. The gaseous air blurred Rama's vision but cleared for a split second. To Rama's surprise, a large man stood above him. Upon further inspection, the "man" had long dark fur and hands twice the size of his own. "My name is Faboo, come with me."


"Faboo" Source: Wikipedia

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Authors Note
This story is loosely based off the stories of Ramayana. This story focuses on two cities and an avatar named Rama. Rama is fierce with a bow and kills many dark creatures. He ends up marrying the kings daughter after completing the challenge of breaking the sacred bow. Rama is soon exiled by his father for fourteen years. Fortunately for Rama, his wife Sita and brother accompany him. I used some characters from this story and ideas of dark and light to fuel the overlying theme. In his exile, Rama makes a new friend who is a monkey like human named Hanuman.

Tuesday, February 7, 2017

Extra Reading Week 4: Hindu Gods and Heroes



Hindu Gods and Heroes Notes

  • Pg 13-47
  • The Vedic Age: 3000 years ago in the Aryan tribe of eastern Panjab
  • Charms, magic, black magic all good ideas and used in story
  • Dyausha-pita=sky god, Prithivi Mata=earth god, Vayu=wind, Parjanya=rain god, Surya= sun god, Agni=fire god
  • Elements come back into play
  • Dyaush-pita pretty much is Zeus 
  • Personal gods and nature-powers
  • Indra and Asvina became worshipped because they were heroes
  • ^Somewhat become gods through their legends
  • Indra seems to have inherited qualities of Zeus
  • would like to do a story picturing gods going away once people stop believing and new ones coming about
  • Not much of a storyline, more history, facts and theory 
  • I can create a story mimicking the going and coming of gods using this info

"Indra" Source: Wiki Commons


Bibliography
Hindu Gods and Heroes by Lionel D. Barnett




Monday, February 6, 2017

Reading Notes: Ramayana, Section D





Section D Notes

  • Havana's brother Kumbhakarna good warrior, maybe lazy reminds of snorlax
  • Hanuman saves the day again after a brutal attack using the secret weapon
  • Definitely want to use Hanuman in my story more
  • Ravana and his son are both using powers of illusion
  • I like this illusion, it solidifies their position as the bad guy
  • Ravana's son is killed, needs to be in story to develop Ravana's character
  • Ravana is super mad about his son dying and wants Lakshmana to pay
  • Indra helps out Rama by supplying his chariot, might switch this our with something cooler
  • Rama shoots Ravana's multiple heads with arrows but it does not kill him, Ravana is stronger than I thought
  • Using the flaming weapon (powers) Rama kills Ravana
  • Gods and people rejoice 
  • Ravana's wife is in despair but could possibly be Sita? This would be a crazy twist
  • Rama is suspicious of Sita, I agree it seemed like she didn't try too hard to escape Ravana
  • Sita turns out to be her normal self after passing the trial by fire (awesome)
  • Rama returns home just in time (his brother was going to commit suicide) kind of crazy
  • Rama is King!
  • Rama is still suspicious of Sita? Sends her into exile? what??
  • Rama transcends into his non-earthly being

"Rama and Ravana" Source: MindTheNews

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