Thursday, May 4, 2017

Improvements




Week 15: Improvement Thoughts


  • Planning Weeks: I think this is a great idea. I am always a fan of a structured planned course because I am bad at organization
  • Expand Story: Again I enjoy knowing when I need to have things finished by. And because the stories take a decent amount of time, I like the idea of having an expanded planning period. 
  • Audio Recordings: I am not the biggest fan of audio recordings. I tend to zone out when listening and don't pick up on a lot of key details. People are different though, so this may be better for someone else!
  • Writing Tutorials: I like this idea! I learn by seeing and some aspects of my grammar are awful. Although it has improved some, I think seeing examples would help a lot.
  • Thematic Reading: I really like this idea and was even thinking about suggesting it. I believe it would engage the students even more if there was an overall theme surrounding that weeks' stories.
  • Movie Week Suggestion: I think it would be cool to have one or two weeks where the reading assignment is a short movie that would span over two parts (a and b). I would like to see where the story adaptations extended after seeing a movie.

Thursday, April 27, 2017

Week 14 Story: Tali




The Story of Tali




"Waves" Source: Pixabay



"And you!" said King Tanaka. "You will be exiled to the Sathar Desert." the King said with a smirk. 
Tali's heart sank into her stomach. The Sathar Desert was they driest place of the known world. The ocean had never been out of her sight and the thought of it made her sick.
"Please!" she begged. "I have done very little harm to anyone besides the incident with Jara."
"You will leave this instant!" the King screamed.
The guards took her. Her grandfather, the King, kept his smug gaze on her as they escorted her out of the hall. Her grandfather had always disliked her. Her happy clumsy personality conflicted with his harsh stern ways. She regretted the incident with her cousin Jara. "I would not be in this mess if it were not for that wretched girl." She thought to herself.
Tali had always been jealous of her cousins relationship with her brother, Kaloo. From a young age the two had always gotten along and excluded Tali from activities. As a young teen Tali attended Jara's birthday party where she performed her sabotage. As Jara was blowing out her candles, Tali drew the water from the barrels and splashed it down on Jara's head. Despite her bubbly personality, Tali had never handled jealously well. She was banned from using her manipulation of water from then on.
 After the birthday incident, her water powers grew weak from lack of use. She began practicing in secret by the great fountains at night. In the vast desert Tali would have no moisture nor water sources to manipulate. She believed her evil grandfather had banished her to the desert in the hopes of destroying her water abilities.
That night she was placed in a locked carriage used for prisoners. The two guards, leading the carriage, headed east towards the Sathar Desert. The trip would be five full grueling days. On the second day they let her out of the carriage to get some fresh air. Tali immediately recognized the young guard that opened the door. It was one of her friends she had known in school. 
"Tali?" The young guard said. 
"Is that you Bathar?" Tali responded. 
"They had not told me who we were escorting, why we taking you to such a horrid place?" The young guard asked.
"My grandfathers orders." Tali responded.
"No talking! Back in the carriage!" The guard captain yelled.
Bathar led Tali back into the carriage slipping her an extra slice of bread. It was three more days of traveling until the reached her final destination. Bathar unlocked the back of the carriage and let Tali out. The sun blinded her eyes and the dry hot air burned her skin. Her shackles were removed and she was given a small knife, canteen, and a loaf of old bread. The guards and the carriage turned around and headed back towards Tali's home. She opened the canteen. No water, of course. Inside there was a small rolled up note.
"Head south by east for one day."
The message had been from Bathar. She set off towards the hills in the distance as the sun began to set. She decided to take shelter under a small overhanging rock for the night. She had only been asleep for a few hours before the sun began to shine bright, waking her up. The sky around her was pitch black but a bright star, that she thought was the sun, was shining from the hills. It shown with as much power as the sun. No longer tired, Tali set off towards the mysterious star.



Authors Note

Tali's character is based off of the kindness, selflessness, and loyalty similar to Sita. Sita was the daughter of King Janaka. This gave me the idea to have her grandfather be King Tanaka. Just as Rama was accompanied by Sita and Lakshmana, I wanted her to have some help along the way. This is where Bathar came into the picture. Even though he was not a permanent companion, he helped Tali along the way. The bright jewel towards the end of the story draws inspiration from the Syamantaka Jewel found in the stories of Krishna. 

Bibliography

Divine Archer by Gould


Wednesday, April 26, 2017

Week 14 Reading Notes: The Life of Buddha




The Life of Buddha Part B

"Buddha Teaching the Five" Source: Wiki Commons
  • Buddha remained under the tree for one more week after obtaining knowledge
  • He began traveling the world then returning to the tree 
  • Two brothers Trapusha and Bhallika offer Buddha food and profess their faith in him
  • Brahma convinces Buddha to teach the world
  • He decides to preach his law to everyone despite the fact it may be confusing
  • Buddha seeks the first man to hear his law
  • He sets out for Bernares to find his old disciples 
  • The boatman wanted Buddha to pay for his trip, so Buddha just flew across the river
  • He finds his old followers and convinces him he is the Buddha
  • He spoke all of his law and the five monks glorified him
  • Kaundinya is the first monk to show he understands
  • Now there are six saints in the world to teach
  • Yasas turns down the offer to follow so they go look for him
  • Buddha explains the story with him as a hare
  • Before traveling to Uruvilva Buddha had obtained 60 monks
  • Buddha schools four musicians in their own instrument after they laughed at him
  • King Padmaka gave his body to save his people
  • He explains like Padmaka, these people will give their intelligence to save mankind



Bibliography
"The Life of Buddha" By: Herold

Tuesday, April 25, 2017

Week 14 Reading Notes: The Life of Buddha




The Life of Buddha Part B



"Buddha By the Tree" Source: Wikipedia


  • Arata Kalama is a holy man who teaches the doctrine of renunciation
  • Him and his disciples practice perfect austerity
  • He does not want to teach Arata's Doctrine
  • All the citizens of Rajagriha rush to see him
  • King Vimbasara goes to visit him at his home on the hillside
  • He no longer desires anything, only seeks true law
  • He goes to visit the hermit Rudraka the son of Rama
  • He does not believe his teachings and seeks true law once again
  • Five of Rudraka's disciples joined him
  • Sidd meditated so hard the gods thought he died
  • He mediated for six years  never moving
  • He became very skinny and decided to stop
  • He starts to eat a lot
  • His followers leave him because they think he only seeks nourishment 
  • He uses the shroud of a dead slave as his new clothes
  • He has five dreams this night
  • He sits beneath the tree of knowledge and says he will not move until he attains supreme knowledge 
  • The evil god Mara wants to kill Sidd
  • Sidd never moved despite Mara about to attack him
  • He hurled rocks and arrows at Sidd but they exploded and became flowers
  • Mother Earth protects Sidd and makes Mara go away
  • He attains perfect knowledge and the Earth shakes 12 times
  • He becomes Buddha and is to dispel the darkness


Bibliography
"The Life of Buddha" By: Herold

Wednesday, April 19, 2017

Week 13 Reading Notes: The Life of Buddha





The Life of Buddha Part B

"Buddha and Rahula" Source: Wiki Commons

  • The King builds three huge palaces for Siddhartha out of adoration
  • The King lived his life as a great man
  • Pure soul and good virtues he was an example to all
  • Siddhartha and Gopa have a son named Rahula
  • Siddhartha is very sheltered and wants to leave the palace so the king clears out all the evil in the world so he is not subjected to it
  • The gods are jealous of his life and create an old man to taint his perfect view of the world
  • Old age freaks him out so the gods make another man with disease
  • Gopa has a dream of the end of the world and her being naked
  • Sidd tells her that this is a great dream
  • A god has the form of a monk and convinces Sidd to become a monk
  • His dad opposes this idea
  • Sidd goes to the stables and sneaks out of the palace
  • Says he will not return until the has seen the end of life and death
  • He tells a hero to take his horse and jewels back to his father
  • He cuts his hair and looses is expensive clothes
  • Gopa and the King freak out and command a search
  • Chandaka the hero tells the king what happened
  • Kanthaka  returns to the stables and falls dead




Bibliography
"The Life of Buddha" By: Herold

Tuesday, April 18, 2017

Week 13 Reading Notes: The Life of Buddha




The Life of Buddha Part A


"Siddhartha Meditating" Source: Wiki Commons

  • King Suddhodana of Kapilavastu: very bright, generous, modest and just
  • His Wife is Queen Maya
  • The Queen asks for favors of the poor, she rose to the top of the palace
  • Maya has a dream of an elephant in her womb
  • She is pregnant and will have a son
  • All sins are forgiven in the city
  • They have a son named Siddhartha
  • Asita is a great hermit
  • He says his son will only bring great joy and glory
  • He also says that he will set the world free from evil
  • He finished with foreseeing that Siddhartha would denounce his royalty
  • Queen Maya dies after seven days and he falls under the care of her sister
  • He is dressed in the finest clothes and Mahaprajapati takes him to the temple of gods
  • Suddhodana and Siddhartha sing songs in the midst of the statues of gods
  • His teacher realizes he can teach him no more, and it should be there other way around
  • He meditated by a tree and the people thought he was a god
  • Everyone realizes he will be the light of the world
  • Gopa and Siddhartha are to be married after some trouble deciding 


Bibliography
"The Life of Buddha" By: Herold

Thursday, April 13, 2017

Week 12 Story Planning: Tali



Tali

"Waves" Source: Pixabay



Tali's Character
  • Tali is Kaloo's sister, they are not very close
  • She was always jealous of Kaloo and Jara's relationship
  • Tali is very similar to Rama
  • She has the ability to manipulate water, found this out by falling off of a boat
  • Her personality is clumsy and bubbly and is usually always happy
  • She is meant to be exiled to the Sathar Desert
  • This was decided by her grandfather King Tanaka to limit to hopefully cause her ability to go stop working
  • King Tanaka has always disliked her
  • King Tanaka thinks she is weak and was always unfair towards her

Idea's from Notes

  • Would like to use ideas from the "Divine Archer", "Krishna", and "Eastern Legends/Stories"
  • "Sita is the daughter of King Janaka" - I would like her to have similar qualities to Sita (caring, giving, selfless, and loyal) Would also like her other grandfather to be more like King Janaka
  • "Sita and Lakshmana join Rama on his exile" - At some point I would like to see Tali make her way to where her cousin, Rama, was exiled. It would be cool to see these two characters together
  • "The demon in the form of a Giant Crane swallows Krishna but escaped and tore the bird in two" - Since she can control water I would like to see her escape her boat but have to deal with a giant water bird
  • "The Syamantaka jewel emits the power of sunlight" - Along her journey (after escape) to find Rama, have her run into the sun god and obtain his jewel
  • "The jewel brings happiness to good men and death to evil men" - Have the grandfather who does not likelier steal her jewel and brings him death
  • "It burned Sudak to ashes and consumed the city" - On her return have her defeat the fire creature and put out the fires in the city

Bibliography

Divine Archer by Gould