Thursday, April 13, 2017

Week 12 Story Planning: Tali



Tali

"Waves" Source: Pixabay



Tali's Character
  • Tali is Kaloo's sister, they are not very close
  • She was always jealous of Kaloo and Jara's relationship
  • Tali is very similar to Rama
  • She has the ability to manipulate water, found this out by falling off of a boat
  • Her personality is clumsy and bubbly and is usually always happy
  • She is meant to be exiled to the Sathar Desert
  • This was decided by her grandfather King Tanaka to limit to hopefully cause her ability to go stop working
  • King Tanaka has always disliked her
  • King Tanaka thinks she is weak and was always unfair towards her

Idea's from Notes

  • Would like to use ideas from the "Divine Archer", "Krishna", and "Eastern Legends/Stories"
  • "Sita is the daughter of King Janaka" - I would like her to have similar qualities to Sita (caring, giving, selfless, and loyal) Would also like her other grandfather to be more like King Janaka
  • "Sita and Lakshmana join Rama on his exile" - At some point I would like to see Tali make her way to where her cousin, Rama, was exiled. It would be cool to see these two characters together
  • "The demon in the form of a Giant Crane swallows Krishna but escaped and tore the bird in two" - Since she can control water I would like to see her escape her boat but have to deal with a giant water bird
  • "The Syamantaka jewel emits the power of sunlight" - Along her journey (after escape) to find Rama, have her run into the sun god and obtain his jewel
  • "The jewel brings happiness to good men and death to evil men" - Have the grandfather who does not likelier steal her jewel and brings him death
  • "It burned Sudak to ashes and consumed the city" - On her return have her defeat the fire creature and put out the fires in the city

Bibliography

Divine Archer by Gould



2 comments:

  1. Hi Vann,
    Just reading over your notes, I think you have some really great ideas for this week's story! I can tell you know what you want to do with the story, so I am sure that it will turn out great. I can't wait to some back and see what you write! I am intrigued by Tali.

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  2. Hello Vann, I just want to first of all compliment you on how you have everything set up so nicely. It really gives me a good understanding of where you are trying to go with this story. I think just making sure you are developing the characters as they appear in your story. Also having a clear way to explain each relationship of the characters. I think this will be a great story! Good luck!

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